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Hobbies (Sample)



Student's sentence : 
     Im always busy but I make sure to do my hobbies. I love travelling so I schedule a trip once in every year.
     I go to different places. Travelling allows me to adopt to new situations. 



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Im always busy but I make sure to do my hobbies. I love travelling so I schedule a trip once in every year.
I go to different places. Travelling allows me to adopt to new situations. 


   I'm always busy but I make sure to do my hobbies. I love travelling so I schedule a trip once a year.
   I go to different places. Travelling allows me to adapt to new situations.  

  > Please don't forget the contracted form of "I am" which is "I'm".
 > "Once a year" is the correct simple expression.
 >  "Adopt" means to embrace, while "adapt" means to adjust. "Adapt to" is a fixed expression.


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